my favourite place

my favourite place is home because I can be home with my mum and family. My second favourite place is tawhaiora house because i can play computer games  with him and have time with him . my third favourite place is Cassandra's house because we can pat her dog . my fourth favourite place is school because i can play and with friends.

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  1. Nice job Harry. Can you use some descriptive words so people reading your story can know a bit more about these places.

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