acrostic poem.(school) (writing)
new Zealand poem.(writing)
Kia ora! My name is Harry, I go to Papakura Central School. I am in Year 4 and my teacher is Miss Henderiks. In my family there is Robert, Timothy, my Mum, my Dad, Lily and I. My favourite food is McDonalds, my favourite movie is Star Wars and in my spare time I like to play Minecraft. I think I am good at Minecraft and soccer and I love learning about Maths. My goal for this year is to be the best at Maths in the class.
new Zealand poem.(writing)
I ended up doing an acrostic poem (new Zealand) but did it about school instead.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used nice long sentences in your acrostic poem not just one word. And it is great that most of your sentences are about the same topic, next time we just need to make sure that the topic is similar to the word you are using for you acrostic poem. But I am glad to see that you noticed this and are always trying to improve!
ReplyDeletethanks! sorry i was not going on my blog earlier
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