persuasive writing.
Should we grow our own veggies? 26/8/2020
. you would have to get a big land area that cost a lot of money!
. you would have a small place to play
. you will have to do a lot of work
.conclusion
hello friend! Are you ready to read this book? Yay! You are!! This is a story about why you should not grow your veggies.
If you wanted to grow veggies you would have to pay a lot of money.
It will cost more money to buy a big field as you get closer to the middle of Auckland.
If your mum and dad said “GO OUTSIDE” you would have a small place
to play because you would have a big garden to grow the veggies.
When your mum and dad are doing work you would have to do a lot
of work because you would have to plant a lot of veggies and harvest a lot of veggies.
I think you shouldn’t grow all your own veggies. Because for a large
family you would need lots of money, space and time.
i like how you mad it
ReplyDeletethanks mia!!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Harry,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have listed your reasons and you ended well with a concluding statement. Next time start your persuasive writing with a statement of opinion.
OK!!! and thank you!!!!
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