persuasive writing.

Should we grow our own veggies? 26/8/2020


. you would have to get a big land area that cost a lot of money!


. you would have a small place to play


. you will have to do a lot of work


.conclusion


hello friend! Are you ready to read this book? Yay! You are!! This is a story about why you should not grow your veggies.


If you wanted to grow veggies you would have to pay a lot of money. 

It will cost more money to buy a big field as you get closer to the middle of Auckland.


If your mum and dad said “GO OUTSIDE” you would have a small place

 to play because you would have a big garden to grow the veggies.


When your mum and dad are doing work you would have to do a lot

 of work because you would have to plant a lot of veggies and harvest a lot of veggies.


I think you shouldn’t grow all your own veggies.  Because for a large

 family you would need lots of money, space and time.



Comments

  1. i like how you mad it

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  2. Hi Harry,
    I like how you have listed your reasons and you ended well with a concluding statement. Next time start your persuasive writing with a statement of opinion.

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  3. OK!!! and thank you!!!!

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